I See You
Hey everyone it’s been quite a sometime since my last post. The new firm I have signed up with kept me a bit busy for blogging.
I was kinda thinking, all of my so called “Poems” carried a negative notion. like leaving college,missing friends,running away from one’s own dream company.For a change I thought I should writing something about the brighter side of life. You know something that will make us feel lite and feel good sort of a post.
So here goes another rhyme titled “I See You”
I hope to defy impossibility through this bit of carving
for just words wont describe your endowment of charming
you are that sprite, you used to prank me in my dreams
I woke up cursing the sun, you belong to his own realms
deity created you , he needs to take a bow
I marvel looking at you if you are really sent from above
I celebrate that day, that day I see you around my den
benignant is your presence, my den turned in to a heaven
At the times when I miss you , I close my eyes to see you in my mind
your smile flashes such a brilliance it’s ironical that it still leaves me blind
I wish to borrow a part of your asset that very thing they call affection
blessed you are with such an present, bearing it like mother of conviction
As I start penning down the ending line
I wish to recount on a dear of mine
This rhyme that you have just read through,
is dedicated to my good old buddy, baby Shru
This is first ever feel good thing I have penned down , talking of “feel good”, the only thing that comes in to my mind is the song “Subah Subah” from the movie “I See You”. I guess now you will figure why this post is named so.
February 15, 2009 at 1:11 pm
Baby Shru?? I didnt understand something… This poem is romantic?
February 16, 2009 at 12:41 pm
Lol! maga “Baby Shru” ,That’s my old friend whom I wanted dedicate some thing written by self. You know a memento kind of stuff. Is it Romantic? Well you should tell me. I have tried my best to flatter a Chick here, not sure if I was any good at it [:D]
February 16, 2009 at 12:47 pm
Flatter or impress?
February 16, 2009 at 12:50 pm
Hmmm Since you have put it that way, I’ll say “Better Both ”
February 16, 2009 at 3:29 pm
good one bro
February 17, 2009 at 3:49 am
Thanks mate
February 17, 2009 at 8:46 am
oh daya.., thanks a ton!!! its d best thng i’ve ever heard.. kudos to u man!! u rock
February 17, 2009 at 8:48 am
n it doesn matter if its romantic or flatterin or impressive, so long as it is dedicated to me
i cant believe the poet in u.., u r jus amazin man \m/
February 17, 2009 at 9:40 am
My pleasure shru, I am glad you liked it. But personally I am not quite satisfied with that work. Since you have liked it, I’ll pat my own back